Final products and feedback (HEALTH)

blue poster feedback
red poster feedback
green poster feedback

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z6uiCkTz-Rs&t=17s
this is the longer video advert it is 2 minutes 15 seconds long but as the video was required  to be 60 seconds or less i had to cut it down 
here is the shortened video 

video feedback

Feedback response-what to build on next time
For the blue poster I would make it more obvious that the whole point is that it is supposed to look like a pull up as a big complaint was that it looked blurry rather than like he was doing a pull up. 

For the red poster I would'nt change too much as the feedback was quite positive however if i was to make improvements, i would change the angle at which I took the base picture as i think the picture looks like i'm focusing to much on Sean rather than on the basketball which was supposed to be the focus 

For the green poster i would change the picture as i think it looks like its been taken for further away than i'd like as i wanted it to appear closer than it looks in the advert 

For the video advert i would ad a slide at the end advertising the better health campaign and i think id give more context as to what the video is advertising as i think the message of the video is conveyed better in the longer video than the shorter video, the way i would do this is by adding more dialogue for will so he could get the point across in the video. 







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